大学英语四六级考试写作应试策略语言学习中心 唐进概 述
大纲要求
评分标准
本教程的适应对象
－有强烈的过关愿望
－有一定的英语基础
－多写、多练、多背
目标,12 / 15分大纲要求
一般要求：能用常见的应用文体完成一般的写作任务，能描述个人经历、事件、观感、情感等，能就一般性话题或提纲在半小时内写出 120词 的短文，
内容基本完整、用词恰当，语篇连贯。能在一般或应用写作中使用恰当的写作技能。
较高要求：能写日常应用文，能写自己专业论文的英语摘要，能借助参考资料写出与专业相关、结构基本清晰、内容较为丰富的报告和论文，能描写各种图表，能就一定的话题在半小时内写出 160词 的短文，内容完整，条理清楚，文理通顺。
更高要求：能就一般性主题比较自如地表达个人的观点，做到文章结构清晰、内容丰富、逻辑性强。
能用英语撰写所学专业的技术报告、论文。能在半小时内写出 200词 的说明文或议论文，内容完整，
文理通顺，思想表达清楚 。
评分标准－ 1
2分：条理不清，思路紊乱 …… 有严重错误
5分：基本切题，表达思想不够清楚，连贯性差，有较多的严重语法错误
8分：基本切题，有些地方表达思想不够清楚，语言勉强连贯，有少量语法错误
11分：切题，表达思想清楚，文字连贯，有少量语法错误
14分：切题，表达思想清楚，文字通顺，基本上没有语法错误评分标准－ 2
字数 90－ 99：扣 1分
字数 80－ 89：扣 2分
字数 70－ 79：扣 3分
字数 60－ 69：扣 4分
字数 50－ 59：扣 5分评分标准－ 3
总体评分原则,就总的印象给出奖励分，而不是按照语言点的错误数目扣分
综合评判原则,切题，是否清楚表达思想，是否用英语表达思想
避免趋中原则,……
我们的问题
不会用英语表达自己的想法
写出来的英语不地道
写作模板太多，记不住应试对策－ 1
160~180个单词
整洁
审题
选择适当 框架；填空
检查应试对策－ 2
内容 不跑题即可
结构 上牢记 总分总,先写主题句 (Topic Sentence)，
再写分论点，最后写总结句 (Conclusion)。
语言 最重要，往往使评分产生重大差异，语言要 模仿和包装 。
基本过程基本表达
人们认为,it is generally/ widely believed/ held/
agreed that
越来越,be increasingly + adj.,be on the rise,the
growing number of
万能理由
1,方便,convenient / convenience
2,效率,efficient / efficiently / efficiency
3,节省和浪费,save time / money / space; economical,thrift
waste time / money / space; costly,lavish
4,人的心理健康,independent,cooperative,competitive,
considerate,confident,creative,sociable,
perseverance; selfish,isolated,conservative
5,人的身体健康,health,disease,strong,strength,energetic
6,娱乐,colorful,pleasure,joy,recreation,entertainment,relax,tired,boring,lonely
7,环境,environment,pollute,poisonous,dirty
8,安全和危险,safe,danger,risk
9,经验,experience,social experience,enter the society
10,人际,humane,fair,unfair,help,assist,freedom,freely
结尾万能公式一：结论
Obviously（此为过渡短语）,we can draw the
conclusion that good manners arise from
politeness and respect for others.
to sum up,in conclusion,in brief,on account of
this,thus
Thus,it can be concluded that…,Therefore,we
can find that…
结尾万能公式二：建议
Obviously,it is high time that we took some
measures to solve the problem.
Accordingly,I recommend that some measures be
taken.
Consequently,to solve the problem,some
measures should be taken.
检查：不要犯低级错误
字母大小写
不标准的符号
单词拼写
主谓一致
动词时态
名词单复数应试对策－ 3
长短句交叉
主动变被动
主题句原则
一二三原则
用词是否恰当，准确，形象，尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词
关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词
短语优先原则
多变句式原则长短句交叉
As a creature,I eat; as a man,I read,Although
one action is to meet the primary need of my body
and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of
mind,they are in a way quite similar.
主动变被动
适当用被动代替主动，这样能更客观的反映事实
句子开头不要总是用 we / I
… we should pay attention to… / Attention should be
paid to…
… It is,therefore,high time that some applicable
approaches were implemented by the service
industry like that,Thus,its competitive edge will
be sharpened effectively,
主题句原则
隐藏主题句是不明智的一 二 三原则
1） first,second,third,last（不推荐，原因：俗）
2） firstly,secondly,thirdly,finally（不推荐，原因：俗）
3） the first,the second,the third,the last（不推荐，原因：俗）
4） in the first place,in the second place,in the third place,lastly（不推荐，原因：俗）
5） to begin with,then,furthermore,finally（推荐）
6） to start with,next,in addition,finally（推荐）
7） first and foremost,besides,last but not least（强烈推荐）
8） most important of all,moreover,finally （强烈推荐）
9） on the one hand,on the other hand（适用于两点的情况）
10） for one thing,for another thing（适用于两点的情况）
用词：善于使用插入语 － 1
常见的形容词 (词组 )、副词作插入语的有,sure
enough(果然 ); strange; worse still(更糟糕的是 );most
important(最重要的是 ); honestly; obviously; however;
otherwise; luckily; unfortunately; besides; first;
second; especially; surprisingly等。
例如,
－ Worse still,the lion could even carry off the baby
in its mouth.
－ We must do the experiment carefully; otherwise
you‘ll get another result,
－ Honestly,I don’t need it at the moment,
－ He likes the country,especially in spring.
用词：善于使用插入语－ 2
常见的不定式有,to tell the truth; to be short(简单地 );to begin with(首先 ); to be sure(自然、当然、果然 );to be honest/frank; to make things worse; to
make a long story short; to speak of(值得一提的是 ),to
be fair,to sum up(概括地说 ) 等。这些插入语表示说话人的态度,在句子中作独立成份。
－ To tell the truth,this is all Greek to me,
用词：善于使用插入语－ 3
常见的现在分词短语有,generally speaking; frankly
speaking; judging from/by; talking of(谈到 );
considering(考虑到,因为是 );putting it mildly(说得客气一点 )等。这些分词用来修饰全句。
－ Judging from appearance,he seems to be a
strong man.
用词：善于使用插入语－ 4
常见的介词短语有,in fact; in addition; in a
word; on the other hand; in other words; in
one‘s opinion; in that case; by the way; of
course; as a rule(通常 );to one’s surprise; for
example; on the contrary(相反 );in a way(在某点上、在某种程度上 ); for one thing; for
another (thing)等。
－ In a way,I think we both won in the
game.
用词：善于使用插入语－ 5
常见的从句有,if you don‘t mind; if you like;
if you please; if necessary; if any; if I may
say so; if convenient; as it happens等。
－ You can,if you please,come to join
us in the game,
用词：善于使用插入语－ 6
常见的固定短语,as a result; that is (to say);
what‘s more; as above; all in all(总之 ),等。
例如,
－ All in all,they have had a wonderful
time today,
用词：学会换词
考试中一般不要出现 good,bad,many,
thing,think,people,opinion 等
applicable代替 proper,approaches代替
ways,implement代替 carry out,sharpen
one's competitive edge代替 enhance one's
competitiveness
COMPUTER AND I
I never forget the exceedingly (very)
thrilling (exciting) day when my mother
bought me a computer as birthday
present,which exerted a tremendous
fascination on me (be interested in sth) so
that I indulged myself in googling (search)
an army of (a lot of) useful information I
had expected…
The dawn of the new century witnessed the
increasing popularity of (more and more
popular) computers,Coincident with (with)
the advancement (development) of science
and technology,computers pouring into
(enter into) the current (now) society as a
fashion are appealing to (be interested in sth)
growing individuals (more and more people),
It is no exaggeration to say we have been
submerged by them,in large measure!
短语优先原则
I cannot bear it,/ I cannot put up with it.
I want it,/ I am looking forward to it.
多变句式原则－加法（串联）
可以在任何句子之间加 and,但最好是前后的句子又先后关系或者并列关系。比如说：
－ I enjoy music and he is fond of playing guitar.
如果是二者并列的，我们可以用一个地道的英语句型：
－ Not only the fur coat is soft,but it is also warm.
其它的短语可以用,besides,furthermore,likewise,moreover
多变句式原则－转折
The car was quite old,yet it was in excellent condition.
The coat was thin,but it was warm.
更多的短语：
despite that,still,however,nevertheless,in spite of,despite,
notwithstanding
多变句式原则－ 因果（ SO）
The snow began to fall,so we went home.
更多短语：
－ then,therefore,consequently,accordingly,hence,as
a result,for this reason,so that
多变句式原则－附加
The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine.
I don’t enjoy that book you are reading.
Mr liu,our oral English teacher,is easy-going.
多变句式原则－排比
Nowadays,energy can be obtained through various sources
such as oil,coal,natural gas,solar heat,the wind and ocean
tides,
We have got to study hard,to enlarge our scope of knowledge,
to realize our potentials and to pay for our life,
多变句式原则－ 换言之
－ I am enthusiastic about you,That is to say,I love you.
－ I am wild about you,In other words,I have fallen in love with
you.
－ I cannot bear it,That is to say,I cannot put up with it or I am
fed up with it.
更多短语,in more difficult language,in simpler words,put it
more simply
举例－ 1
For example,
For instance,
It can be given a concrete example,
Take,,for an example,it is a very obvious
case
There is one impressive example I want to
mention here.
Let’s see an example.
It is best illustrated if given the following
example.
Let me provide an example.
举例－ 2
Perhaps the most important example of …is that…
To illustrate this,there is an example that is very persuasive.
An instance that accompanies this reason is that…
An example can give the details of this argument,…
It is a forceful example to demonstrate the importance of,.
History presented many examples of..
In order to see this point clearly,let us see an example,
理由－ 1
The third but very important reason is that…
The third,not the last is that,
The last factor to be taken seriously is…
Finally,moreover,last but not least,furthermore,
理由－ 2
It might also be noted that….
Another reason why …..( 凑字数，但不可滥用 ) is
that….( 有利于写长句 )What is also worth noticing
is that….
There is another factor that deserves some words
here,
We may look into every possible reason,however,
foremost reason for …,Is …,
表达观点－ 1
To my point of view
To my mind,the advantages far overweigh
the drawbacks / disadvantages /
shortcomings,
For my part,I stand on side of the latter
opinion that..
As far as I am concerned,I am inclined to be
on the side of the latter view,
After a thorough consideration,for my part,
I am in favor of the latter view that…
If asked to make a decision,I would prefer..
表达观点－ 2
Taking into consideration both sides of
the issue,I tend to favor the latter view..
When considering opinions of both sides,
I am inclined to …
If it is up to me to make a choice
between … and …
I would rather choose … over…
I would have to say that,if I were faced
with the decision,I would follow ….
At the risk of sounding too direct,I
prefer to…
大纲要求
评分标准
本教程的适应对象
－有强烈的过关愿望
－有一定的英语基础
－多写、多练、多背
目标,12 / 15分大纲要求
一般要求：能用常见的应用文体完成一般的写作任务，能描述个人经历、事件、观感、情感等，能就一般性话题或提纲在半小时内写出 120词 的短文，
内容基本完整、用词恰当，语篇连贯。能在一般或应用写作中使用恰当的写作技能。
较高要求：能写日常应用文，能写自己专业论文的英语摘要，能借助参考资料写出与专业相关、结构基本清晰、内容较为丰富的报告和论文，能描写各种图表，能就一定的话题在半小时内写出 160词 的短文，内容完整，条理清楚，文理通顺。
更高要求：能就一般性主题比较自如地表达个人的观点，做到文章结构清晰、内容丰富、逻辑性强。
能用英语撰写所学专业的技术报告、论文。能在半小时内写出 200词 的说明文或议论文，内容完整，
文理通顺，思想表达清楚 。
评分标准－ 1
2分：条理不清，思路紊乱 …… 有严重错误
5分：基本切题，表达思想不够清楚，连贯性差，有较多的严重语法错误
8分：基本切题，有些地方表达思想不够清楚，语言勉强连贯，有少量语法错误
11分：切题，表达思想清楚，文字连贯，有少量语法错误
14分：切题，表达思想清楚，文字通顺，基本上没有语法错误评分标准－ 2
字数 90－ 99：扣 1分
字数 80－ 89：扣 2分
字数 70－ 79：扣 3分
字数 60－ 69：扣 4分
字数 50－ 59：扣 5分评分标准－ 3
总体评分原则,就总的印象给出奖励分，而不是按照语言点的错误数目扣分
综合评判原则,切题，是否清楚表达思想，是否用英语表达思想
避免趋中原则,……
我们的问题
不会用英语表达自己的想法
写出来的英语不地道
写作模板太多，记不住应试对策－ 1
160~180个单词
整洁
审题
选择适当 框架；填空
检查应试对策－ 2
内容 不跑题即可
结构 上牢记 总分总,先写主题句 (Topic Sentence)，
再写分论点，最后写总结句 (Conclusion)。
语言 最重要，往往使评分产生重大差异，语言要 模仿和包装 。
基本过程基本表达
人们认为,it is generally/ widely believed/ held/
agreed that
越来越,be increasingly + adj.,be on the rise,the
growing number of
万能理由
1,方便,convenient / convenience
2,效率,efficient / efficiently / efficiency
3,节省和浪费,save time / money / space; economical,thrift
waste time / money / space; costly,lavish
4,人的心理健康,independent,cooperative,competitive,
considerate,confident,creative,sociable,
perseverance; selfish,isolated,conservative
5,人的身体健康,health,disease,strong,strength,energetic
6,娱乐,colorful,pleasure,joy,recreation,entertainment,relax,tired,boring,lonely
7,环境,environment,pollute,poisonous,dirty
8,安全和危险,safe,danger,risk
9,经验,experience,social experience,enter the society
10,人际,humane,fair,unfair,help,assist,freedom,freely
结尾万能公式一：结论
Obviously（此为过渡短语）,we can draw the
conclusion that good manners arise from
politeness and respect for others.
to sum up,in conclusion,in brief,on account of
this,thus
Thus,it can be concluded that…,Therefore,we
can find that…
结尾万能公式二：建议
Obviously,it is high time that we took some
measures to solve the problem.
Accordingly,I recommend that some measures be
taken.
Consequently,to solve the problem,some
measures should be taken.
检查：不要犯低级错误
字母大小写
不标准的符号
单词拼写
主谓一致
动词时态
名词单复数应试对策－ 3
长短句交叉
主动变被动
主题句原则
一二三原则
用词是否恰当，准确，形象，尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词
关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词
短语优先原则
多变句式原则长短句交叉
As a creature,I eat; as a man,I read,Although
one action is to meet the primary need of my body
and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of
mind,they are in a way quite similar.
主动变被动
适当用被动代替主动，这样能更客观的反映事实
句子开头不要总是用 we / I
… we should pay attention to… / Attention should be
paid to…
… It is,therefore,high time that some applicable
approaches were implemented by the service
industry like that,Thus,its competitive edge will
be sharpened effectively,
主题句原则
隐藏主题句是不明智的一 二 三原则
1） first,second,third,last（不推荐，原因：俗）
2） firstly,secondly,thirdly,finally（不推荐，原因：俗）
3） the first,the second,the third,the last（不推荐，原因：俗）
4） in the first place,in the second place,in the third place,lastly（不推荐，原因：俗）
5） to begin with,then,furthermore,finally（推荐）
6） to start with,next,in addition,finally（推荐）
7） first and foremost,besides,last but not least（强烈推荐）
8） most important of all,moreover,finally （强烈推荐）
9） on the one hand,on the other hand（适用于两点的情况）
10） for one thing,for another thing（适用于两点的情况）
用词：善于使用插入语 － 1
常见的形容词 (词组 )、副词作插入语的有,sure
enough(果然 ); strange; worse still(更糟糕的是 );most
important(最重要的是 ); honestly; obviously; however;
otherwise; luckily; unfortunately; besides; first;
second; especially; surprisingly等。
例如,
－ Worse still,the lion could even carry off the baby
in its mouth.
－ We must do the experiment carefully; otherwise
you‘ll get another result,
－ Honestly,I don’t need it at the moment,
－ He likes the country,especially in spring.
用词：善于使用插入语－ 2
常见的不定式有,to tell the truth; to be short(简单地 );to begin with(首先 ); to be sure(自然、当然、果然 );to be honest/frank; to make things worse; to
make a long story short; to speak of(值得一提的是 ),to
be fair,to sum up(概括地说 ) 等。这些插入语表示说话人的态度,在句子中作独立成份。
－ To tell the truth,this is all Greek to me,
用词：善于使用插入语－ 3
常见的现在分词短语有,generally speaking; frankly
speaking; judging from/by; talking of(谈到 );
considering(考虑到,因为是 );putting it mildly(说得客气一点 )等。这些分词用来修饰全句。
－ Judging from appearance,he seems to be a
strong man.
用词：善于使用插入语－ 4
常见的介词短语有,in fact; in addition; in a
word; on the other hand; in other words; in
one‘s opinion; in that case; by the way; of
course; as a rule(通常 );to one’s surprise; for
example; on the contrary(相反 );in a way(在某点上、在某种程度上 ); for one thing; for
another (thing)等。
－ In a way,I think we both won in the
game.
用词：善于使用插入语－ 5
常见的从句有,if you don‘t mind; if you like;
if you please; if necessary; if any; if I may
say so; if convenient; as it happens等。
－ You can,if you please,come to join
us in the game,
用词：善于使用插入语－ 6
常见的固定短语,as a result; that is (to say);
what‘s more; as above; all in all(总之 ),等。
例如,
－ All in all,they have had a wonderful
time today,
用词：学会换词
考试中一般不要出现 good,bad,many,
thing,think,people,opinion 等
applicable代替 proper,approaches代替
ways,implement代替 carry out,sharpen
one's competitive edge代替 enhance one's
competitiveness
COMPUTER AND I
I never forget the exceedingly (very)
thrilling (exciting) day when my mother
bought me a computer as birthday
present,which exerted a tremendous
fascination on me (be interested in sth) so
that I indulged myself in googling (search)
an army of (a lot of) useful information I
had expected…
The dawn of the new century witnessed the
increasing popularity of (more and more
popular) computers,Coincident with (with)
the advancement (development) of science
and technology,computers pouring into
(enter into) the current (now) society as a
fashion are appealing to (be interested in sth)
growing individuals (more and more people),
It is no exaggeration to say we have been
submerged by them,in large measure!
短语优先原则
I cannot bear it,/ I cannot put up with it.
I want it,/ I am looking forward to it.
多变句式原则－加法（串联）
可以在任何句子之间加 and,但最好是前后的句子又先后关系或者并列关系。比如说：
－ I enjoy music and he is fond of playing guitar.
如果是二者并列的，我们可以用一个地道的英语句型：
－ Not only the fur coat is soft,but it is also warm.
其它的短语可以用,besides,furthermore,likewise,moreover
多变句式原则－转折
The car was quite old,yet it was in excellent condition.
The coat was thin,but it was warm.
更多的短语：
despite that,still,however,nevertheless,in spite of,despite,
notwithstanding
多变句式原则－ 因果（ SO）
The snow began to fall,so we went home.
更多短语：
－ then,therefore,consequently,accordingly,hence,as
a result,for this reason,so that
多变句式原则－附加
The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine.
I don’t enjoy that book you are reading.
Mr liu,our oral English teacher,is easy-going.
多变句式原则－排比
Nowadays,energy can be obtained through various sources
such as oil,coal,natural gas,solar heat,the wind and ocean
tides,
We have got to study hard,to enlarge our scope of knowledge,
to realize our potentials and to pay for our life,
多变句式原则－ 换言之
－ I am enthusiastic about you,That is to say,I love you.
－ I am wild about you,In other words,I have fallen in love with
you.
－ I cannot bear it,That is to say,I cannot put up with it or I am
fed up with it.
更多短语,in more difficult language,in simpler words,put it
more simply
举例－ 1
For example,
For instance,
It can be given a concrete example,
Take,,for an example,it is a very obvious
case
There is one impressive example I want to
mention here.
Let’s see an example.
It is best illustrated if given the following
example.
Let me provide an example.
举例－ 2
Perhaps the most important example of …is that…
To illustrate this,there is an example that is very persuasive.
An instance that accompanies this reason is that…
An example can give the details of this argument,…
It is a forceful example to demonstrate the importance of,.
History presented many examples of..
In order to see this point clearly,let us see an example,
理由－ 1
The third but very important reason is that…
The third,not the last is that,
The last factor to be taken seriously is…
Finally,moreover,last but not least,furthermore,
理由－ 2
It might also be noted that….
Another reason why …..( 凑字数，但不可滥用 ) is
that….( 有利于写长句 )What is also worth noticing
is that….
There is another factor that deserves some words
here,
We may look into every possible reason,however,
foremost reason for …,Is …,
表达观点－ 1
To my point of view
To my mind,the advantages far overweigh
the drawbacks / disadvantages /
shortcomings,
For my part,I stand on side of the latter
opinion that..
As far as I am concerned,I am inclined to be
on the side of the latter view,
After a thorough consideration,for my part,
I am in favor of the latter view that…
If asked to make a decision,I would prefer..
表达观点－ 2
Taking into consideration both sides of
the issue,I tend to favor the latter view..
When considering opinions of both sides,
I am inclined to …
If it is up to me to make a choice
between … and …
I would rather choose … over…
I would have to say that,if I were faced
with the decision,I would follow ….
At the risk of sounding too direct,I
prefer to…
