复旦大学新视野系列研究生课程:科研论文的构思、撰写和发表
科研论文撰写和送审过程中
导师和学生的互动
杨雄里 院士
下一次
今晚 6时:蒲慕明教授, 怎样学习做一个好的科学家,
杨雄里院士
神经生物学家,1963年上海科技大学生物系毕业, 1963-
1999年在中国科学院上海生理研究所工作, 历任研究实习员,
助理研究员, 副研究员, 研究员, 所长 。 1980-1982年在日本
进修并获学术博士学位 。 1985-1987年先后在美国哈佛大学,
贝勒医学院从事合作研究 。 2000年创建复旦大学神经生物学研
究所并任所长 。
曾任中国生理学会理事长, 亚太地区生理学联合会第一副
主席 。 长期从事视觉神经机制的研究, 在几个层次上对视网膜
中的信息传递的调控进行系统研究并有数项新发现 。 1989年获
中科院自然科学一等奖, 1991年当选为中国科学院院士, 2001
年获何梁何利科技进步奖 。 现为 Progress in Neurobiology等
国内外学术刊物编委或主编 。
根据所给的研究结果 ( 确实有困难的同学可自选一篇论文 ),
1,为该论文 拟一个标题 并撰写论文前言, 材料和方法, 结果, 讨
论部分的 概要 ( i.e,outline,限前言不多于 4句, 材料和方法不多于 5
个标题, 结果不多于 6句, 讨论不多于 5句 ) 。
2,为该论文 选一个最适合的杂志, 按照 该杂志的投稿要求, 以你
的名义和通讯作者的身份 给该杂志写一封 全真 ( 除了不用邮寄给该杂志 )
的投稿信 ( cover letter),投稿信写法可参照参考书和鲁白教授的 ppt.
3,按照所投稿杂志的要求撰写 论文摘要 ( 可不做 )
(自选论文的同学请附所依据的论文全文 )
写下你认为最好的一个报告的报告人的名字 ( 本学期最佳被告人 ),
写好姓名和学号打印, 2006年 1月 4日前交西 7号楼 160/168陈晓青 ) 。
日后本作业所依据的论文全文和所发表的杂志等信息将上载到课程网页
上供大家参考,
作 业 二
科研论文撰写和送审过程中
导师和学生的互动
杨 雄 里
复旦大学神经生物学研究所
本研究室科研论文撰写的程序
1,导师和学生讨论论文的基本构思、框架、
插图;学生说明其实验结果的创新点;决
定投寄何种杂志。
2,学生向导师提供与该课题有关的主要综述
和原始论文( 20~ 30篇)。
3,由学生本人撰写论文的初稿,送交导师。
4,导师对初稿作出评论;请学生补充实验数据,
并提出修改意见,但通常并不立即修改。
5,参考导师评论和修改意见,学生撰写第二稿,
送交导师。
6,导师在第二稿基础上进行修改,部分内容完
全重写,交回学生,请学生提出修改意见
(用不同字体标明),形成第三稿。
本研究室科研论文撰写的程序
7,导师与学生对第三稿进行讨论后,由导师拟
就第四稿,交回学生再评论和修改。
8,对学生的评论和修改意见作认真考虑后,拟
就第五稿(半定稿),请学生评论、修改。
9,导师最后定稿(第六稿),并对英文作仔细
润色。
10.由学生严格按投寄杂志的要求整理定稿、送
审。
本研究室科研论文撰写的程序
杂志主编对送审论文的说明信( cover letter)
四种类型
1,不作任何修改即表示接收。
2,表示接收的意图,但指出需作修改。
3,不明确表示,收” 或,拒”。
4,退稿。
From,"NeuroReport" <nr@lww.co.uk>
To,<xlyang@fudan.edu.cn>
Sent,Wednesday,June 18,2003 6:19 PM
Subject,NeuroReport,Decision on Voltage-gated K+ channel subunits on cholinergic and dopaminergic amacrine cells
18 Jun 2003
Dear Dr,Yang,
Submission no.,NR-D-03-00757
Article title,Voltage-gated K+ channel subunits on cholinergic and dopaminergic amacrine cells
Corresponding author,Dr,Xiong-Li Yang
Your paper has been seen by our reviewers and I have received from the Section Editor a favourable
recommendation,I am pleased to let you know that we will therefore publish it in the next issue of
NeuroReport to be compiled,There is no specific criticism of the paper and no requests of revision (and
this makes a most pleasant and unusual change from our routine; congratulations!).
A decision is not yet been made on the cover of the issue but we will take into consideration the figure that
you are offering for the purpose,If your picture is chosen (the chances are high),I will need an ad hoc
figure legend,that could be read and understood without direct reference to the paper itself; it could be
quite long,but it has to be extremely clear,Will you have a go at it?.
Thank you for sending this interesting paper to our Journal.
Kind regards.
Yours sincerely,
Giorgio Gabella,MD DSc
Editor in Chief
NeuroReport
Localization of Kv subunits in
retinal amacrine cells
Cholinergic Dopaminergic
Kv 3.1b
Kv 4.3
回复论文评审意见的程序
1,导师和学生对评审意见逐条进行
讨论,决定如何答复,是否需作
补充实验。
2,由学生拟出答复意见 。
1,Zhang,D.Q,and Yang,X.L,(1998) GABA modulates color-opponent bipolar cells,Brain
Res.,792:319-323.
2,Lu,T,Shen,Y,and Yang,X.L,(1998) Desensitization of AMPA receptors on horizontal cells isolated
from crucian carp retina,Neurosci Res.,31:123-135.
3,Shen,Y,and Yang,X.L,(1999) Zinc modulation of AMPA receptors may be relevant to splice
variants in carp retina,Neuroscience Lett.,259:177-180.
4,Shen,Y.,Lu,T,and Yang,X.L,(1999) Modulation of desensitization at glutamate receptors in
isolated crucian carp horizontal cells by concanavalin A,cyclothiazide,aniracetam and pepa.,
Neuroscience,89:1979-1990.
5,Zhang,D.Q.,Yang,R,and Yang,X.L,(1999) Suppression of sustained and transient on signals of
amacrine cells by GABA is mediated by different receptor subtypes,Science in China,Ser.C,42:395-
400.
6,Zhang,J.and Yang,X.L.(1999) GABAb receptors in Muller cells of the bullfrog retina,NeuroReport,
10:1833-1836,
7,Li,P.,Yang,X.L.(1999) Zn2+ differentially modulates glycine receptors versus GABA receptors in
isolated carp retinal third –order neurons, Neuroscience Lett.,269:75-78.
8,Han,M.H,and Yang,X.L,(1999) Zn2+ differentially modulates kinetics of GABAc vs GABAa
receptors in carp retinal bipolar cells,NeuroReport,10:2593-2597.
9,Yang,X.L,Gao,F,and Wu,S.M,(1999) Moduation of horizortal cell function by GABAa and
GABAc receptors in dark-and light-adapted tiger salamander retina,Visual Neuroscience,16:1-13.
Publications (1998~Present )
10,Yang,X.L,Shen,Y.,Han,M.H,and Lu,T,(1999) Physiological and Pharmacological
Characterization of Glutamate and GABA Receptors in the Retina,Korean Journal
of Physiology and Pharmacology,3:461-469.
11,Du,J.L,and Yang,X.L,(1999) Retinal bipolar cell——A model for the study of
neuronal signal integration, Chinese Science Bulletin,44:1737-1743.
12,Yang,X.L.,Shen,Y,and Han,M.H.(1999) Glutamate and γ-aminobutyric receptors
and their characteristics in retina,Chinese Science Bulletin,44:1548-1556.
13,Yang,X.L,Gao,F,and Wu,S.M.(1999) Modulation of horizortal cell function by
GABAa and GABAc receptors in dark-and light –adapted tiger salamander retina,
Visual Neuroscience.1-13.
14,Shen,Y.,and Zhou,Y,and Yang,X.L,(1999) Characterization of AMPA receptors on
isolated amacrine-like cells in carp retina,Eur.J.Neurosci.,11:4233-4240,
15,Xu,H.P,and Yang,X.L,(1999) Differential modulation by GABA of signals from red
–and green –sensitive cones in the carp retina,Brain Res Bul,,51:493-497,
16,Zhao,J.W.,Du,J.L.,Li,J.S,and Yang,X.L.(2000) Expression of GABA transporters
on bullfrog retinal Müller cells, Glia 31:104-117
17,Du,J.L,and Yang,X.L,(2000) Subcellular localozation and complements of GABAA
and GABAc receptors on bullfrog retinal bipolar cells,J,Neurophysiol.,84:666-676
34,Xu,H.P.,Zhao,J.W,and Yang,X.L,(2003) Cholinergic and dopaminergic amacrine cells
differentially express calciumchannel subunits in the rat retina,Neuroscience,118:763-768.
35,Tian,M.,Chen,L.,Xie,J.X.,Yang,X.L,and Zhao,J.W,(2003) Expression patterns of
inwardly rectifying potassium channel subunits in rat retina,Neurosci Lett.,345:9-12.
36,Tian,M.,Xie,J.X.,Zhao,J.W,and Yang,X.L,(2003) Differential expression of voltage-gated
postssium channel subunits on cholinergic and dopaminergic amacrine cells in rat retina.
NeuroReport,14:1763-1766
37,Li,G.L,and Yang,X.L,(2003) Glycinergic input to carp retinal ganglion cells may be
mediatedby glycine receptors with homologous kinetics,Brain Res.,991:171-179
38,Shen,Y,Zhang,A.J,and Yang,X.L,(2003) Uncoupling of horizontal cells alters the receptive
fields of retinal bipolar cells,NeuroReport,14:2159-2163
39,Huang,H.,Luo,D.G.,Shen,Y.,Zhang,A.J.,Yang,R and Yang,X.L.(2004) AMPA receptor is
involved in transmission of cone signal to ON bipolar cells in carp retina,Brain Res.,1002:
86-93
40,Huang,H.,Luo,D.G.,Shen,Y.,Zhang,A.J.,Yang,R and Yang,X.L.(2004) AMPA receptor is
involved in transmission of cone signal to ON bipolar cells in carp retina,Brain Res.,1002:
86-93
41,Yang,X.L.,(2004) Characterization of receptors for glutamate and GABA in retinal neurons.
Progress in Neurobiology,73:127-150
26,Du,J,L.,Yang,X,L,(2002) Bullfrog retinal bipolar cells may express heterogeneous glycine
receptors at dendrites and axon terminals,Neuroscience Letters 322,177-181.
27,Yang,X.L.,Fan,G and Wu,S.M,(2002) Non-linear,high-gain and sustained –to-transient signal
transmisson from rods to amacrine cells in dark-adapted retina of Ambystoma,J,Physiol.,539,
239-251.
28,Du,J,L.,Yang,X,L,(2002) Glycinergic synaptic transmission to bullfrog retinal bipolar cells is
input-specific,Neuroscience,113,779-784.
29,Xu,H.P.,Zhao,J.W.,Yang,X.L,(2002) Expression of voltage-dependent calcium channel subunits in
the rat retina,Neurosci,Lett 1,329:297-300.
30,Luo,D.G.,Li,G.L and Yang,X.L (2002) Zn2+ modulates light responses of color-opponent bipolar
and amacrine cells in the carp retina,Brain Res,Bull.,58:461-468.
31,Xu,H,P.,Yang,X,L,(2002) Different effects of low Ca2+ on signal transmission from rods and cones
to bipolar cells in carp retina,Brain Res.,957:136-143.
32,Luo,D,G.,Yang,X.L,(2002) Suppression by zinc of transient OFF responses of carp amacrine cells
to red light is mediated by GABAA receptors,Brain Res.,958:222-226.
33,Du,J.L.,Xu,L.Y.,and Yang,X.L,(2002) Glycine receptors and transporters on bullfrog retinal
Müller cells,NeuroReport,13:1653-1656.
42,Cao,L.H.,Yu,Y.C.,Zhao,J.W.,and Yang,X.L,(2004) Expression of natriuretic peptides in
rat Muller cells,Neurosci,Lett,365:176-179
43,Chen,L.,Yu,Y.C.,Zhao,J.W and Yang,X.L* (2004) Inwardly rectifying potassium channels
inrat retinal ganglion cells, Eur,J,Neurosci.,20,956-964
44,Liu,J.,Zhao,J.W.,Du,J.L and Yang,X.L.(2005) Functional GABAB receptors ate expressed at
the cine photoreceptor terminals in bullfrog retina,Neurosci,132,103-113
45,Lee,S.C.,Zhong,Y.M and Yang,X.L,(2005) Expression of glycine receptor and transporter on
bullfrog retinal Muller cells,Neurosci,Lett,387:75-79.
46,Shen,Y.,Chen,L.,Ping,Y,and Yang,X.L,(2005) Glycine modulates the receptive field center
response of ON type rod-dominant bipolar cells in carp retina,Brain Res,Bull,67:492-497.
47,Huang,H.,Lee,S,C,and Yang,X.L.(2005) Modulation by melatonin of glutamatergic
synaptic transmission in the carp retina,J, Physiol,569:857-871.
48,Yu,Y.C.,Cao,L.H,and Yang,X.L.(2005) Modulation by brain natriuretic peptide of GABA
receptors on rat retinal bipolar cells,J,Neurosci,(in press)
Thank you !