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“你是登上长城的美国好汉,
新华社北京 6月 28日电当美国总统克林顿第一眼看到中国的万里长城时,他连声说道：,真美,太壮观了,简直令人惊叹 。,
,我很难想象长城历史如此久远,城砖都有四百多年历史,
” 克林顿星期天站在长城上说 。 克林顿在星期六跟中国领导人几轮繁忙的会晤后,今天换上了墨绿色短袖上装,米色西裤,看上去更像一个游客 。
1972年尼克松总统站在长城上说,,这是一堵伟大的墙 。
” 1984年里根总统爬上长城后说,,令人敬畏,令人神往 。,
长城是公元前 200年由秦朝 （ 公元前 221—前 207年 ） 的第一个皇帝秦始皇开始兴建的,目的是抵御北方游牧部落的军队侵扰秦朝的农田 。
长城从东海岸一直绵延到西部的隔壁沙漠 。
北京今天是个大热天,气温高达 37摄氏度 （ 华氏 99度 ）,是入夏以来气温最高的一天 。 北京东北 80余公里的慕田峪翠绿的群山笼罩在一层薄雾中,青灰色的长城沿山脊蜿蜒而上 。 慕田峪陡峭的山峰曾是阻碍游牧民族入侵的天然屏障 。
克林顿总统一家是在游览了曾经居住过中国明清两朝 （
1368—1911） 24位皇帝的紫禁城后,兴致勃勃地来到了慕田峪长城 。
当他们长长的车队抵达慕田峪山麓脚下后,克林顿一家迎着扑面而来的热浪,乘缆车登上慕田峪长城 。 52岁的克林顿同戴着遮阳帽的夫人希拉里手拉手攀登到 15号敌楼 。
慕田峪长城总长三千多米,共有 22座敌楼,始建于明朝,曾经是通往京畿重要的军事关隘 。
“我认为长城是中国的象征,是向世界展示一个统一的中华民族的象征,而不再是一道将人们拒之门外的墙,,他摘下墨镜对围着他采访照相的中美两国记者说 。
照完相,克林顿总统与女儿又攀上前方的 16号敌楼,来到慕田峪长城最险峻的地段 。,长城陡然起伏,比我想象的壮观得多,,他说 。
,如果我们在长城上再往上爬几个小时,我们的身体会更健壮,,他对记者说 。,这对我是很好的锻炼,对你们也是很好的锻炼 。,
克林顿总统和他的一家在长城上游览了一个多小时 。 他们走下长城后,在一块石碑前停留,石碑上镌刻：,中国的长城过去是用来防御外族侵扰的设施,现在它是团结各国人民的纽带,愿中国的长城继续是团结世界各国人民的象征 。,
慕田峪长城管理人员向总统一家赠送了慕田峪长城模型,介绍长城的画册和登上长城的证书 。 赠送证书的管理人员借用毛泽东主席,不到长城非好汉,的诗句对克林顿总统说：,您是登上长城的美国好汉 。,
克林顿总统在长城留言簿上写到：,感谢你们带我,我的家人和随行人员游览长城 。 长城比我们想象的更为辉煌 。
” （ 完 ）
新闻特稿又称特写,它与消息或硬新闻的区别是：
硬新闻 特稿
5W 人情味,娱乐性,愉悦性新闻事件 情绪,氛围,心情,讽刺,幽默有写作套路 没有固定的模式,可以发挥记者的想像最重要的在导语里 最重要的内容不一定放在导语中,可以在导语中通过趣闻逸事,小故事,气氛描写等表现出来优秀的记者需要有一对灵敏的耳朵去寻找精彩的引语 ‘ 一双敏锐的眼镜去观察细节 。
鲜活的场面是通过记者亲眼观察到的一个故事,再通过记者的笔展现给读者的 。
InRuralChina,a Steep Price of Poverty:DyingofAIDS
ByELISABETHROSENTHAL,,纽约时报,,October28,2000
ZHENGZHOU,China — To celebrate the Moon Festival last
month,a frail retired doctor named Gao Yaojie scraped together money to hire a
taxi,packed it full of medicines,brochures,sweet drinks and cakes and slipped
off,once again,from this provincial capital to see patients in remote mud-brick
villageswherecountlessfarmersare silentlydyingofAIDS.
Chinese officials here generally deny there is AIDS in rural parts of
Henan Province,a farming region in central China south of Beijing,They have
forbidden the local news media and government health workers to discuss the
topic and blocked outside researchers from studying it,Dr,Gao,a small serious
woman of 76 in dark hand-me-down clothes,is regularly chased out ofthe villages
shegoestohelp.
But Dr,Gao and a few others familiar with the area say small
towns here and scattered elsewhere in central China are experiencing an
unreported,unrecognized AIDS epidemic,A few covert studies suggest some of
the towns have some ofthe highest localized rates of H.I.V,infection in the world;
somesay20percent.
BeijingMopsUpAfterMudBath
ByAndrewBrowne
BEIJING (Reuters) - Theskies rained mud over Beijing Thursday.
Clouds of fine brown dust swirling in from Inner Mongolia combined with
thunderyweathergavetheChinesecapitala mudbath.
Mud was caked on cars and bicycles and streaked on the raincoats
of residents brave enough to venture outside under conditions that posed a greater-
than-usualhealthhazard.
Overnight thunderstorms left trees dripping with brown slime.The
mud-slickened streets and choking air graphically demonstrated what Beijing
authorities have only just publicly admitted -- the city is now China's most
pollutedmetropolis.
By some measures,it is one of the dirtiest cities in the world,In
thepastseveralweeksthecityhasstartedpublishingpollutiondata.
Beijing registered 190 on the latest national weekly pollution
index--exceededonlybyGuiyanginsouthernGuizhouprovince.
The previous week,Beijing topped the index at 259,By
comparison,Shanghai was at 170 and Shenyang,once thought to have the foulest
airinChina,wasat 152.
A reading of100-199 is supposed to indicate slight pollution,200-
299 medium pollution and 300-500 heavy pollution,but the scale does not comply
withinternationalstandardsandis conservative.
Beijing is near the top of the World Bank's list of polluted cities.
According to the Beijing Environmental Protection Bureau,sulphur dioxide levels
at this time of year quintuple to five times the World Health Organization's
recommendedsafetylevel.
The new national weekly pollution index measures suspended
particles,sulphurdioxideandnitrogenoxide,amongotherpollutants.
Suspended particles are a particular problem in Beijing at this
time of year when clouds of dust whipping in from the Gobi desert mingle with
blacksootfromtensofthousandsofhomestovesburningcoalbricks.
Residents called in to radio talk shows Thursday to complain
about the mud deluge,Car washers spinning wet rags at roadsides to attract
attentiondida roaringtrade.
The China Daily Thursday published the results of a survey that
showed the carbon monoxide level in 30 downtown streets was double state-set
safetystandards.
China's 12 million cars discharged 10 million tons of carbon
monoxideandonemilliontonsofnitrogenoxideeachyear,thepapersaid.
The number of cars in Beijing was increasing by 15 percent each
yearand hadnowreached1.2million,itsaid.
Beijing planners have belatedly awoken up to the
pollution crisis,Leaded gas was banned in June last year,Starting
this month,spot checks are being carried out on vehicle
emissions,Drivers whose vehicles infringe environmental guidelines
are fined,and forced to fit their cars with catalytic converters.
Vast swathes of forest are being planted to halt the
encroachment of the Gobi desert and halt the dust storms,And
Beijing plans to use more natural gas in place of low-grade coal.
The official Xinhua news agency Thursday reported
that Beijing had been turned into a "mud city."
It quoted Ding Deping,an official with the Beijing
Meteorological Bureau as saying a strong breeze from northern
Inner Mongolia and the Loess Highlands had made a "surprise
attack" on Beijing.
The forecast is for more strong winds and dust.
鲜活的对立面是平铺直叙
,干巴巴,没细节 。
形容词,副词,修饰语跟细节毫无关系,那是欺骗人的鬼把戏 。 不要用,兴高采烈,,,悲痛万分,之类的形容词,要特别的细节 。
读者喜欢细节不是漂亮的成语,唐诗宋词,形容词,套话 。 读者需要的是实实在在的与众不同的细节 。 这种细节能让读者观察到事件的本质或人物的内心世界 。
（ 案例：张北地震 ）
要使用有描写能力的动词,而不是形容词,副词；
切忌概念化,一般化,笼统化,结论化课堂联系,用少数几个字构建一个丰满的人物形象：
教授总统小偷国家主席银行出纳厨师出租车司机大学一年级女生大学三年级女生女博士生
特稿写作上课堂作业讲评新闻特稿的写作
“你是登上长城的美国好汉,
新华社北京 6月 28日电当美国总统克林顿第一眼看到中国的万里长城时,他连声说道：,真美,太壮观了,简直令人惊叹 。,
,我很难想象长城历史如此久远,城砖都有四百多年历史,
” 克林顿星期天站在长城上说 。 克林顿在星期六跟中国领导人几轮繁忙的会晤后,今天换上了墨绿色短袖上装,米色西裤,看上去更像一个游客 。
1972年尼克松总统站在长城上说,,这是一堵伟大的墙 。
” 1984年里根总统爬上长城后说,,令人敬畏,令人神往 。,
长城是公元前 200年由秦朝 （ 公元前 221—前 207年 ） 的第一个皇帝秦始皇开始兴建的,目的是抵御北方游牧部落的军队侵扰秦朝的农田 。
长城从东海岸一直绵延到西部的隔壁沙漠 。
北京今天是个大热天,气温高达 37摄氏度 （ 华氏 99度 ）,是入夏以来气温最高的一天 。 北京东北 80余公里的慕田峪翠绿的群山笼罩在一层薄雾中,青灰色的长城沿山脊蜿蜒而上 。 慕田峪陡峭的山峰曾是阻碍游牧民族入侵的天然屏障 。
克林顿总统一家是在游览了曾经居住过中国明清两朝 （
1368—1911） 24位皇帝的紫禁城后,兴致勃勃地来到了慕田峪长城 。
当他们长长的车队抵达慕田峪山麓脚下后,克林顿一家迎着扑面而来的热浪,乘缆车登上慕田峪长城 。 52岁的克林顿同戴着遮阳帽的夫人希拉里手拉手攀登到 15号敌楼 。
慕田峪长城总长三千多米,共有 22座敌楼,始建于明朝,曾经是通往京畿重要的军事关隘 。
“我认为长城是中国的象征,是向世界展示一个统一的中华民族的象征,而不再是一道将人们拒之门外的墙,,他摘下墨镜对围着他采访照相的中美两国记者说 。
照完相,克林顿总统与女儿又攀上前方的 16号敌楼,来到慕田峪长城最险峻的地段 。,长城陡然起伏,比我想象的壮观得多,,他说 。
,如果我们在长城上再往上爬几个小时,我们的身体会更健壮,,他对记者说 。,这对我是很好的锻炼,对你们也是很好的锻炼 。,
克林顿总统和他的一家在长城上游览了一个多小时 。 他们走下长城后,在一块石碑前停留,石碑上镌刻：,中国的长城过去是用来防御外族侵扰的设施,现在它是团结各国人民的纽带,愿中国的长城继续是团结世界各国人民的象征 。,
慕田峪长城管理人员向总统一家赠送了慕田峪长城模型,介绍长城的画册和登上长城的证书 。 赠送证书的管理人员借用毛泽东主席,不到长城非好汉,的诗句对克林顿总统说：,您是登上长城的美国好汉 。,
克林顿总统在长城留言簿上写到：,感谢你们带我,我的家人和随行人员游览长城 。 长城比我们想象的更为辉煌 。
” （ 完 ）
新闻特稿又称特写,它与消息或硬新闻的区别是：
硬新闻 特稿
5W 人情味,娱乐性,愉悦性新闻事件 情绪,氛围,心情,讽刺,幽默有写作套路 没有固定的模式,可以发挥记者的想像最重要的在导语里 最重要的内容不一定放在导语中,可以在导语中通过趣闻逸事,小故事,气氛描写等表现出来优秀的记者需要有一对灵敏的耳朵去寻找精彩的引语 ‘ 一双敏锐的眼镜去观察细节 。
鲜活的场面是通过记者亲眼观察到的一个故事,再通过记者的笔展现给读者的 。
InRuralChina,a Steep Price of Poverty:DyingofAIDS
ByELISABETHROSENTHAL,,纽约时报,,October28,2000
ZHENGZHOU,China — To celebrate the Moon Festival last
month,a frail retired doctor named Gao Yaojie scraped together money to hire a
taxi,packed it full of medicines,brochures,sweet drinks and cakes and slipped
off,once again,from this provincial capital to see patients in remote mud-brick
villageswherecountlessfarmersare silentlydyingofAIDS.
Chinese officials here generally deny there is AIDS in rural parts of
Henan Province,a farming region in central China south of Beijing,They have
forbidden the local news media and government health workers to discuss the
topic and blocked outside researchers from studying it,Dr,Gao,a small serious
woman of 76 in dark hand-me-down clothes,is regularly chased out ofthe villages
shegoestohelp.
But Dr,Gao and a few others familiar with the area say small
towns here and scattered elsewhere in central China are experiencing an
unreported,unrecognized AIDS epidemic,A few covert studies suggest some of
the towns have some ofthe highest localized rates of H.I.V,infection in the world;
somesay20percent.
BeijingMopsUpAfterMudBath
ByAndrewBrowne
BEIJING (Reuters) - Theskies rained mud over Beijing Thursday.
Clouds of fine brown dust swirling in from Inner Mongolia combined with
thunderyweathergavetheChinesecapitala mudbath.
Mud was caked on cars and bicycles and streaked on the raincoats
of residents brave enough to venture outside under conditions that posed a greater-
than-usualhealthhazard.
Overnight thunderstorms left trees dripping with brown slime.The
mud-slickened streets and choking air graphically demonstrated what Beijing
authorities have only just publicly admitted -- the city is now China's most
pollutedmetropolis.
By some measures,it is one of the dirtiest cities in the world,In
thepastseveralweeksthecityhasstartedpublishingpollutiondata.
Beijing registered 190 on the latest national weekly pollution
index--exceededonlybyGuiyanginsouthernGuizhouprovince.
The previous week,Beijing topped the index at 259,By
comparison,Shanghai was at 170 and Shenyang,once thought to have the foulest
airinChina,wasat 152.
A reading of100-199 is supposed to indicate slight pollution,200-
299 medium pollution and 300-500 heavy pollution,but the scale does not comply
withinternationalstandardsandis conservative.
Beijing is near the top of the World Bank's list of polluted cities.
According to the Beijing Environmental Protection Bureau,sulphur dioxide levels
at this time of year quintuple to five times the World Health Organization's
recommendedsafetylevel.
The new national weekly pollution index measures suspended
particles,sulphurdioxideandnitrogenoxide,amongotherpollutants.
Suspended particles are a particular problem in Beijing at this
time of year when clouds of dust whipping in from the Gobi desert mingle with
blacksootfromtensofthousandsofhomestovesburningcoalbricks.
Residents called in to radio talk shows Thursday to complain
about the mud deluge,Car washers spinning wet rags at roadsides to attract
attentiondida roaringtrade.
The China Daily Thursday published the results of a survey that
showed the carbon monoxide level in 30 downtown streets was double state-set
safetystandards.
China's 12 million cars discharged 10 million tons of carbon
monoxideandonemilliontonsofnitrogenoxideeachyear,thepapersaid.
The number of cars in Beijing was increasing by 15 percent each
yearand hadnowreached1.2million,itsaid.
Beijing planners have belatedly awoken up to the
pollution crisis,Leaded gas was banned in June last year,Starting
this month,spot checks are being carried out on vehicle
emissions,Drivers whose vehicles infringe environmental guidelines
are fined,and forced to fit their cars with catalytic converters.
Vast swathes of forest are being planted to halt the
encroachment of the Gobi desert and halt the dust storms,And
Beijing plans to use more natural gas in place of low-grade coal.
The official Xinhua news agency Thursday reported
that Beijing had been turned into a "mud city."
It quoted Ding Deping,an official with the Beijing
Meteorological Bureau as saying a strong breeze from northern
Inner Mongolia and the Loess Highlands had made a "surprise
attack" on Beijing.
The forecast is for more strong winds and dust.
鲜活的对立面是平铺直叙
,干巴巴,没细节 。
形容词,副词,修饰语跟细节毫无关系,那是欺骗人的鬼把戏 。 不要用,兴高采烈,,,悲痛万分,之类的形容词,要特别的细节 。
读者喜欢细节不是漂亮的成语,唐诗宋词,形容词,套话 。 读者需要的是实实在在的与众不同的细节 。 这种细节能让读者观察到事件的本质或人物的内心世界 。
（ 案例：张北地震 ）
要使用有描写能力的动词,而不是形容词,副词；
切忌概念化,一般化,笼统化,结论化课堂联系,用少数几个字构建一个丰满的人物形象：
教授总统小偷国家主席银行出纳厨师出租车司机大学一年级女生大学三年级女生女博士生
